We have passed the easy part of the edit where I search and destroy/replace some of my over-used words (but, moment, forehead) and have entered the part of the edit where I go through and try to describe more things, because my natural tendency is toward scenes that apparently take place in blank white voids, starring beings of pure energy. You want to fix that before you reach the final.
This part of the edit is slow going, but it’s important.
Pictured: one good boy, not helping. A nearly daily occurrence. I don’t make the rules.
Back to it.